Sorry. It is addressed in version 08

                                      Ron




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Mallory,

Thanks for your careful review. Version 07 (just posted) addresses your 
comments.

                                                                       Ron


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Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-6man-deprecate-router-alert-??
Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
Review Date: 2025-02-12
IETF LC End Date: 2025-02-12
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document deprecates IPv6 Router Alert Option, providing reasons.
It addresses security considerations and gives instructions to IANA. It is a
concise and clear document.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: I am only a little concerned that for readers and implementers of
MLDv2 RFC3810 and MRD RFC4286 that for a time there will be a documentation gap
for the IPv6 Router Alert Option. Perhaps one sentence could instruct readers
while future work on these implementations is pending.

Nits/editorial comments: None.


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