On Mon, Aug 12, 2024 at 10:00:16AM -0700, Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker wrote:
> Nits/editorial comments:
> The document is short, well-written but has a few nits.
> in section 3.1 it says
> Using its previously recorded state (Section 3.1)
> 
> I don't understand (Section 3.1) here, it is already in Section 3.1.

I figured it out, wrapping the <sourcecode> target in a <figure>
container improved readability, see the newly posted -02 draft for the
change:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-sidrops-rrdp-desynchronization-01&url2=draft-ietf-sidrops-rrdp-desynchronization-02&difftype=--html

Kind regards,

Job

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