Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-09 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 2024-02-01 IETF LC End Date: 2024-02-05 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The document is easy to read. I consider the document Ready, but I do have a minor editorial comment that I'd like the author to address. Major issues: N/A Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: Q1: There are a few places where the document says "Currently". I'd prefer to instead say something like "At the time of publishing this document". I do realize this issue already exists in RFC 9092. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
