Christer, thank you for your review. I have entered a Discuss ballot for this document based on my own review.
Lars > On Dec 20, 2022, at 21:47, Christer Holmberg via Datatracker > <nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg > Review result: Almost Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-lake-edhoc-18 > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg > Review Date: 2022-12-20 > IETF LC End Date: None > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: The document is well written, and easy to read. I do have one minor > issue that I would like the authors to address. > > Major issues: N/A > > Minor issues: > > Q1: The document talks about the Initiator and Responder roles, what messages > they send etc. But I can't find a definition of what the roles. I assume the > Initiator initiates something, but unless I have missed it it would be good to > have a few word of role definitions. > > Nits/editorial comments: N/A > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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