Hi Vijay, Thanks very much for reviewing. We just published version 11 which addresses all your comments.
Thanks! Jorge From: Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> Date: Sunday, July 2, 2023 at 12:13 PM To: gen-art@ietf.org <gen-art@ietf.org> Cc: b...@ietf.org <b...@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df....@ietf.org <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df....@ietf.org>, last-c...@ietf.org <last-c...@ietf.org> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10 CAUTION: This is an external email. Please be very careful when clicking links or opening attachments. See the URL nok.it/ext for additional information. Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 2023-07-02 IETF LC End Date: 2023-07-11 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The draft is ready for publications as a Proposed Standard with a few nite. Major issues: 0 Minor issues: 1 (please see below) Nits/editorial comments: 3 (please see below) Minor - Sec 2, you may consider ordering the abbreviations alphabetically as it may be easier for the reader to find what they are looking for. Nits: - Sec 1.1, s/two new DF Algs/two new DF algorithms/ (unless, of course, in your nomenclature, "Alg" means something specific). - Sec 3, the opening sentence is too long. You may consider the following edit: s/route, by replacing/route. It does so by replacing/ - Sec 4.1, bullet d, s/E.g., 50/e.g., 50/
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