On Jan 24, 2023, at 1:35 PM, Thomas Fossati via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > OLD > There remain some differences between EAP-TLS and other TLS-based EAP > methods which necessitates this document. > NEW > There remain some differences between EAP-TLS and other TLS-based EAP > methods which are addressed by this document. > > OLD > Similarly, when the inner authentication protocol indicates that > authentication has succeed > NEW > Similarly, when the inner authentication protocol indicates that > authentication has succeeded
Fixed, thanks. > Style (feel free to ignore): > - "all of" => all > - "both of [these]" => "both" > - "whether or not" => "whether" I'll take a look > Typos: > - indicatoin > - deriviation > - identies Fixed, thanks. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
