Hi Meral, Thanks for the comments.
On Thu, Jul 28, 2022 at 12:01 AM Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-yang-data-model-14 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2022-07-27 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-08-02 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standards Track RFC. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > In Intro section please clarify benefits of this RFC formalizing the > description of the compression rules. : > > "The goal of this document is to formalize the description of the rules to > offer" to allow X Y Z ? > There is a brief description in the introduction. I added few words in the abstract:for -15 This document formalizes the description of the rules for better interoperability between SCHC instances either to exchange a set of rules or to modify some rules parameters. > > Nits/editorial comments: > [Page 3], Section 3, Typo > "options definied"-->"options defined" > done > > [Page 3], Section 3, Typo > "serveur"-->"server" > done > > [Page 6], Section 3.7, Typo > "same enconding."-->"same encoding." > done > > [Page 7], Section 3.10.1, Typo > "unidirectionnal,"--->"unidirectional," > done > > [Page 10], Section 3.10.5, Typo > "range sould"-->"range should" > "recommandation"-->"recommendation" > done > > [Page 10], Section 3.10.5, Typo > "the the"-->"the" > done > > [Page 10], Section 4, Typo > "idenfied"-->"identified" > done > > [Page 33], Typo x2 > "bidirectionnal is forbiden"-->"bidirectional is forbidden" > don't find, should have corrected before
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