Hi Peter,

On Sat, Jul 9, 2022 at 12:23 AM Peter Yee via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org>
wrote:

> Perhaps change the two occurrences of "a SVCB" to "an SVCB" on the
> assumption
> that "SVCB" is read as ess-vee-cee-bee.
>

draft-ietf-dnsop-svcb-https uses "a SVCB", but draft-ietf-add-ddr uses "an
SVCB", so this seems to be an unsettled point.

Specific:
>
> Page 5, 1st bullet item, insert "to" between "trusts" and "not". Or place
> the
> "to" after "not".
>

Thanks, will fix.

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