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Document: draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-flags-08
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2022-06-??
IETF LC End Date: 2022-06-14
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
Issues:
Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits: 2
1) NIT: Doc name inconsistent with scope
The name & title of this draft isn't very indicative of the content of
the document. This document doesn't just define the *flag* for loopback;
it also defines the entire loopback *mechanism*, which is a much bigger
deal.
It appears to me that the primary function of the document is to define
the loopback mechanism, with the definition of the flag being necessary
but secondary.
This could be fixed by simply changing the name and title of the
document. (Or at least the title since the name will disappear in the
resulting rfc.)
Or the specification of the loopback *mechanism* could be moved to a
different document and this document reduced to simply defining the flags.
2) NIT: Outdated reference
IdNits reports:
== Outdated reference: draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-data has been published as
RFC 9197
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