This looks good, though I might suggest adding the update to security considerations to the document change summary in Sec 1.1.
Joe — Dr. Joe Touch, temporal epistemologist www.strayalpha.com > On Jun 3, 2022, at 9:02 AM, Valery Smyslov <smyslov.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi, > > we published a new version, which should address comments > received during IETF LC and directorate reviews. > > Many thanks for very helpful reviews! > > Regards, > Tommy & Valery. > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: IPsec [mailto:ipsec-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of >> internet-dra...@ietf.org >> Sent: Friday, June 03, 2022 6:49 PM >> To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org >> Cc: ip...@ietf.org >> Subject: [IPsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc8229bis-07.txt >> >> >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >> directories. >> This draft is a work item of the IP Security Maintenance and Extensions WG >> of the IETF. >> >> Title : TCP Encapsulation of IKE and IPsec Packets >> Authors : Tommy Pauly >> Valery Smyslov >> Filename : draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc8229bis-07.txt >> Pages : 34 >> Date : 2022-06-03 >> >> Abstract: >> This document describes a method to transport Internet Key Exchange >> Protocol (IKE) and IPsec packets over a TCP connection for traversing >> network middleboxes that may block IKE negotiation over UDP. This >> method, referred to as "TCP encapsulation", involves sending both IKE >> packets for Security Association establishment and Encapsulating >> Security Payload (ESP) packets over a TCP connection. This method is >> intended to be used as a fallback option when IKE cannot be >> negotiated over UDP. >> >> TCP encapsulation for IKE and IPsec was defined in RFC 8229. This >> document updates the specification for TCP encapsulation by including >> additional clarifications obtained during implementation and >> deployment of this method. This documents obsoletes RFC 8229. >> >> >> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc8229bis/ >> >> There is also an htmlized version available at: >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc8229bis-07 >> >> A diff from the previous version is available at: >> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc8229bis-07 >> >> >> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at >> rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> IPsec mailing list >> ip...@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec > > _______________________________________________ > Tsv-art mailing list > tsv-...@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tsv-art
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