Hi, Due to a system glitch I cannot enter my reviews via the tool. Until this is fixed, here are my early comments to draft-ietf-6man-grand, which was assigned to me.
Version Reviewed - 04 State: Ready with Editorial Comments This is a very well written document. I appreciate the section describing the other Solutions Considered, which is a good guidance and reference for future discussions and extensions. I have two editorial comments only: 1. In Section 3 the Normative Language with capitalizations is used to describe requirements from solutions. This seems quite unnecessary, and certainly cannot be verified for conformance. 2. I would suggest moving or copying the first sentence in Section 6 (that says that all normative text in the memo can be found in this section) in the Introduction section. Thanks and regards, Dan
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