Hello Stephane please see my responses inline. thanks
On Mon, Jun 7, 2021 at 1:49 AM Stephane Bortzmeyer <bortzme...@nic.fr> wrote: > On Sun, Jun 06, 2021 at 11:13:23PM -0700, > Suhas Nandakumar via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> wrote > a message of 72 lines which said: > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft > > Thanks for the review. > > > Section 2.3 > > 1. MAX_MINIMISE_COUNT and MINIMISE_ONE_LAB - are the values for these > constants > > normatively defined or are they just recommendations ? Can the same be > > clarified in the document ? > > The sentence "a good value is 10" seems to me indicating that it is > just a possible value. The important thing is to have a limit. Do we > think it should be rewritten with RFC 2119 words? MUST have a limit > and the RECOMMENDED value is 10? > [suhas] agree with the framing here and it makes it clearer about the objectives > > > Section 4. > > The section starts with query for "foo.bar.baz.example" and walk through > refers > > to a.b.example.org as query input. Also no reference to > ns1.nic.example seems > > to be appear in the detailed flows. > > Can this be updated it to match overall ? > > Actually, there are *two* independant requests. One for > foo.bar.baz.example and one afterwards ("Here are more detailed > examples") for a.b.example.org. In the first one, ns1.nic.example is > indeed used. > > Should we use the same QNAME for both? > [suhas] I will let you make a final call on this one. I was able to read and understand but the intent wasn't clear with 2 different Qnames on the first read. > > > Section 5 > > "QNAME minimisation may also improve lookup performance for TLD > > operators. For a TLD that is delegation-only, a two-label QNAME > > query may be optimal for finding the delegation owner name, depending > > on the way domain matching is implemented." > > This para doesn't clarify how the performance will be improved. Can it > > be extended with some context around the same. > > With QNAME minimisation, an authoritative name server MAY use exact > matching ("do I know foobar.example?") while without it, it MUST use > tree matching ("do I know thing.stuff.foobar.example or an ancestor of > it?") and tree matching is typically slower. > [suhas] This helps thanks
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