Hi Lars I met with the authors on Friday 5/14 and we went over my questions and review of the draft in detail.
I will respond today with a detailed update on the status of my review based on feedback from the authors from Friday meeting that the draft is in a “Ready” state with minor updates & recommendations. Kind Regards Gyan On Mon, May 17, 2021 at 4:38 AM Lars Eggert <l...@eggert.org> wrote: > Gyan, thank you for your review. I have not seen a response from the > editors to your review yet, and so I'm holding off for the moment on > entering a ballot for this document. > > Authors, would you please respond to Gyan's review? > > Thanks, > Lars > > > > On 2021-4-29, at 8:46, Gyan Mishra via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> > wrote: > > > > Reviewer: Gyan Mishra > > Review result: Not Ready > > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > > like any other last call comments. > > > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > > > Document: draft-ietf-bess-datacenter-gateway-?? > > Reviewer: Gyan Mishra > > Review Date: 2021-04-28 > > IETF LC End Date: 2021-04-29 > > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > > > Summary: > > This document defines a mechanism using the BGP Tunnel Encapsulation > > attribute to allow each gateway router to advertise the routes to the > > prefixes in the Segment Routing domains to which it provides access, > > and also to advertise on behalf of each other gateway to the same > > Segment Routing domain. > > > > This draft needs to provide some more clarity as far as the use case and > where > > this would as well as how it would be used and implemented. From > reading the > > specification it appears there are some technical gaps that exist. There > are > > some major issues with this draft. I don’t think this draft is ready yet. > > > > Major issues: > > > > Abstract comments: > > It is mentioned that the use of Segment Routing within the Data Center. > Is > > that a requirement for this specification to work as this is mentioned > > throughout the draft? Technically I would think the concept of the > discovery > > of the gateways is feasible without the requirement of SR within the Data > > Center. > > > > The concept of load balancing is a bigger issue brought up in this draft > as the > > problem statement and what this draft is trying to solve which I will > address > > in the introduction comments. > > > > Introduction comments: > > In the introduction the use case is expanded much further to any > functional > > edge AS verbiage below. > > > > OLD > > > > “SR may also be operated in other domains, such as access networks. > > Those domains also need to be connected across backbone networks > > through gateways. For illustrative purposes, consider the Ingress > > and Egress SR Domains shown in Figure 1 as separate ASes. The > > various ASes that provide connectivity between the Ingress and Egress > > Domains could each be constructed differently and use different > > technologies such as IP, MPLS with global table routing native BGP to > > the edge, MPLS IP VPN, SR-MPLS IP VPN, or SRv6 IP VPN” > > > > This paragraph expands the use case to any ingress or egress stub domain > Data > > Center, Access or any. If that is the case should the draft name change > to > > maybe a “stub edge domain services discovery”. As this draft can be > used for > > any I would not preclude any use case and make the GW discovery open to > be used > > for any service GW edge function and change the draft name to something > more > > appropriate. > > > > This paragraph also states for illustrative purposes which is fine but > then it > > expands the overlay/underlay use cases. I believe this use case can only > be > > used for any technology that has an overlay/underlay which would > preclude any > > use case with just an underlay global table routing such as what is > mentioned > > “IP, MPLS with global table routing native BGP to the edge. The IP or > global > > table routing would be an issue as this specification requires setting a > RT and > > an export/import RT policy for the discover of routes advertised by the > GWs. > > As I don’t think this solution from what I can tell would work > technically for > > global table routing I will update the above paragraph to preclude > global table > > routing. We can add back in we can figure that out but I don’t think any > > public or private operator would change from global table carrying all > BGP > > prefixes in the underlay now drastic change to VPN overlay pushing all > the > > any-any prefixes into the overlay as that would be a prerequisite to be > able to > > use this draft. > > > >> From this point forward I am going to assume we are using VPN overlay > > technology such as SR or MPLS. > > > > NEW > > > > “SR may also be operated in other domains, such as access networks. > > Those domains also need to be connected across backbone networks > > through gateways. For illustrative purposes, consider the Ingress > > and Egress SR Domains shown in Figure 1 as separate ASes. The > > various ASs that provide connectivity between the Ingress and Egress > > Domains could be two as shown in Figure-1 or could be many more as > exists > > with the public internet use case, and each may be constructed > differently > > and use different technologies such as MPLS IP VPN, SR-MPLS IP VPN, or > SRv6 > > IP VPN” with a “BGP Free” Core. > > > > This may work without “BGP Free” core but I think to simplify the design > > complexity I think constraining to “BGP Free” core transport layer. > SR-TE path > > steering as well gets much more complicated if all P routers are running > BGP as > > well. I think in this example we can even explicitly say this example > shows the > > public internet as that would be one of the primary use cases. > > > > This paragraph is confusing to the reader > > > > As a precursor to this paragraph I think it maybe a good idea to state > that we > > are talking global table IP only routing or VPN overlay technology with > SR/MPLS > > underlay transport. That will make this section much easier to > understand. > > > > Figure 1 drawing you should give a AS number to both the ingress domain > and > > egress domain so the reader does not have to make assumptions if it iBGP > or > > eBGP connected to the egress or ingress domain and state eBGP in the text > > below. Lets also call the intermediate ASNs in the middle as depicted > in the > > diagram could be 2 as shown illustratively but could be many operator > domains > > such as in the case of traversing the public internet. In the drawing > I would > > replace ASBR for PE as per this solution as I am stating it has to be a > VPN > > overlay paradigm and not global routing. Also in the VPN overlay > scenario when > > you are doing any type of inter-as peering the inter-AS peering is almost > > always between PE’s and not a separate dedicated device serving a special > > “ASBR-ASBR” function as the PE is acting as the border node providing the > > “ASBR” type function. So in the re-write I am assuming the drawing has > been > > updated changing ASBR to PE. Lets give each node a number so that we > can be > > clear in the text exactly what node we are referring to. In the drawing > please > > update that GW1 peers to PE1 and GW2 peers to PE2 and GW3 peers to PE3. > GW3 > > also peers to GW4 and GW2 peers to GW5 which GW4 and GW5 are part of > AS3. In > > the AS1-AS2 peering top peer would be PE6 peers to PE8 and bottom peer > PE7 > > peers to PE9. So PE6 and PE7 are in AS1 and PE8 and PE9 are in AS2. I > made > > the bottom to ASBRs in AS3 for the selective deterministic load > balancing now > > calling them GW4 and GW5 used later in the problem statement. > > > > One major problem with this problem statement description is that it is > > incorrect as far as GW load balancing that it does not work today in the > > topology given in Figure-1. The function of edge GW load balancing is > based on > > the iBGP path tie breaker lowest common denominator in the BGP path > selection > > which is lowest IGP underlay metric and as long as the metric is equal > and you > > have iBGP multipath enabled you now can load balance to egress PE1 and > PE2 > > endpoints. So in this case flows coming from AS1 into AS2 hit a P > intermediate > > router which has iBGP multipath enabled and has lets say equal cost for > route > > to the next hop attribute assuming next-hop-self is set so the cost to > > loopback0 on PE1 and cost to loopback0 on PE2 is lets say 10, so now you > have a > > BGP multipath. What is required though is the RD has to be unique in a > “BGP > > Free” core RR environment where all PE’s route-reflector-clients peer to > the RR > > and for all the paths that are advertised to the RR to be reflected to > all the > > egress PE edges the RD must be unique for the RR to reflect all paths. > BGP > > add-paths is only used if you have Primary and Backup routing setup where > > PE1-GW1 has a 0x prepend and PE2-GW2 has 1x prepend so now with BGP > add-paths > > along with BGP PIC Edge you now have a edge pre-programmed backup path. > So the > > add-paths is not necessarily something that helps for load balancing and > is in > > fact orthogonal to load balancing as it for Primary / Backup routing and > not > > Active/Active load balancing routing where load balancing with VPN > overlay is > > simply achieved with unique RD per PE and iBGP multipath and equal cost > paths > > to the underlay recursive IGP learned next-hop-attribute in this case > the PE > > loopback 0 per the next hop rewrite via “next-hop-sellf” done on the > PE-RR > > peering in a standard VPN overlay topology. As far as load balancing > being > > accomplished in the underlay what I have stated is independent of SR-TE > however > > with SR-TE candidate path the load balancing ECMP spray to egress PE > egress GW > > AS can also happen as well with prefix-sid. > > > > OLD > > Suppose that there are two gateways, GW1 and GW2 as shown in > > Figure 1, for a given egress SR domain and that they each advertise a > > route to prefix X which is located within the egress SR domain with > > each setting itself as next hop. One might think that the GWs for X > > could be inferred from the routes' next hop fields, but typically it > > is not the case that both routes get distributed across the backbone: > > rather only the best route, as selected by BGP, is distributed. This > > precludes load balancing flows across both GWs. > > > > I am rewriting the text in the NEW as there is some discrepancy in the > routes > > being distributed across the backbone and what gets distributed. So I am > > completely re-writing to make it more clear what we are trying to state > here as > > the text appears technically to be incorrect. To help state the flow > will use > > the BGP route flow to help depict the routing and try to get to the > problem > > statement we are trying to portray. > > > > NEW > > > > Suppose that there are two gateways, GW1 and GW2 as shown in > > Figure 1, for a given egress SR domain and each gateway advertises via > EBGP > > a VPN prefix X to AS2 core domain via EBGP with underlay next hop set > to GW1 > > or GW2. In this case we are Active / Active load balancing with PE1 > and PE2 > > receives the VPN prefix and advertised the VPN prefix X into the > domain with > > next-hop-self set on the PE-RR peering to the PE’s loopback0. The P > routers > > within the domain have ECMP path with IGP metric tie to the egress PE1 > and > > egress PE2 for VPN Prefix X learned from GW1 and GW2. SR-TE path can > now be > > stitched from GW3 to PE3 SR-TE Segment-1 to PE3 to PE6 and PE7 > Segment-2 to > > PE8 and PE9 to Egress Domain via PE1 and PE2 to GW1 and GW2. In this > case > > however we don’t want the traffic to be steered via SR-TE Load > balanced via > > ingress GW3 and want to take GW3 out of rotation and load balance > traffic to > > GW4 and GW5 instead. > > > > **Text above provides the updated selective deterministic gateway > steering > > described below to achieve the goal. I think that may have been the > intent of > > the authors and I am just making it more clear** > > > > As for problem statement as GW load balancing can occur in the underlay > as > > stated easily that is not the problem. > > > > In my mind I am thinking the problem statement that we want to describe > in both > > the Abstract and Introduction is not vanilla simple gateway load > balancing but > > rather a predictable deterministic method of selecting gateways to be > used that > > is each VPN prefix now has a descriptor attached - tunnel encapsulation > > attribute which contains multiple TLVs one or more for each “selected > gateway” > > with each tunnel TLV contains an egress tunnel endpoint sub-tlv that > identifies > > the gateway for the tunnel. Maybe we can have in the sub-tlv a priority > field > > for pecking order preference of which GWs are pushed up into the GW hash > > selected for the SR-ERO path to be stitched end to end. So lets say > you had > > 10 GWs and you break them up into 2 tiers or multi tiers and have maybe > gateway > > 1-5 are primary and 6-10 are backup and that could be do to various > reasons so > > you can basically pick and choose based on priority which GW that gets > added to > > the GW hash. > > > > I have some feedback and comments on the solution and how best to write > the > > verbiage to make it more clear to the reader. > > > > I think in the solution as far s the RT to attach for the GW auto > discovery. > > So with this new RT we are essentially creating a new VPN RIB that has > prefixes > > from all the selected gateways that are discovered from the tunnel > > encapsulation attribute TLV. > > > > In the text here what is really confusing is if the tunnel encapsulation > > attribute is being attached to the underlay recursive route to next hop > > attribute or the VPN overlay prefix. So the reason I am thinking it is > being > > attached to the VPN overlay prefix and not the underlay next hop > attribute is > > how would you now create another transport RIB and if you are creating a > new > > transport RIB there is already a draft defined by Kaliraj Vairavakkalai > or > > BGP-LU SAFI 4 labeled unicast that exits today to advertise next hops > between > > domains for an end to end LSP load balanced path. > > > > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-kaliraj-idr-bgp-classful-transport-planes-07 > > > > IANA code point below > > 76 Classful-Transport SAFI > > [draft-kaliraj-idr-bgp-classful-transport-planes-00] > > > > Also in line with CT another option is BGP-LU SAFI 4 to import the > loopbacks > > between domains which is the next hop attribute to be advertised into > the core > > end to end LSP. So the BGP-LU SAFI RIB could be used for the next GW > next hop > > advertisement between domains so that there is visibility of all the > egress PE > > loopback0 between domains. So you can either stitch the LSP segmented > LSP > > like inter-as option-b SR-TE stitched and use nex-hop self PE-RR next-hop > > rewrite on each of the PEs within the internet domain or you could > import all > > the PE loopback from all ingress and egress domains into the internet > domain > > similar to inter-as opt-c create end to end LSP instantiate an end to > end SR-TE > > path. > > > > Maybe you could attach the RT tunnel encapsulation attribute tunnel tlv > > endpoint tlv to the VPN overlay prefix. Not sure how that would be > beneficial > > the underlay steers the VPN overlay. > > > > So maybe you could couple the VPN overlay new GW RIB RT to the transport > > Underlay CT CLAS RIB or BGP-LU RIB coupling may have some benefit but > that > > would have to be investigated but I think is out of scope of the goals > of this > > draft. > > > > I think we first have to figure out the goal and purpose of this draft > by the > > authors and how the GW discovery should work in light of the CT class CT > RIB > > AFI/SAFI codepoint draft that exists today as well as the BGP-LU option > for > > next hop advertisement within the internet domain. > > > > Section 3 comments > > > > “Each GW is configured with an identifier for the SR domain. That > > identifier is common across all GWs to the domain (i.e., the same > > identifier is used by all GWs to the same SR domain), and unique > > across all SR domains that are connected (i.e., across all GWs to > > all SR domains that are interconnected). > > > > **No issues with the above** > > > > A route target ([RFC4360]) is attached to each GW's auto-discovery > > route and has its value set to the SR domain identifier. > > > > **So here if the RT is attached to the GW auto-discovery route we need > to state > > is that the underlay route and that the PE does a next-hop-self rewrite > of the > > eBGP link to the BGP egress domain next hop to the loopback0 so the GW > next hop > > that we are tracking of all the ingress and egress PE domains is the > egress and > > ingress PE loopback0.** > > > > Each GW constructs an import filtering rule to import any route > > that carries a route target with the same SR domain identifier > > that the GW itself uses. This means that only these GWs will > > import those routes, and that all GWs to the same SR domain will > > import each other's routes and will learn (auto-discover) the > > current set of active GWs for the SR domain.” > > > > **So if this is the case and we are tracking the underlay RIB and attach > a > > route target to all the ingress PE & P next hops which is loopback0 = > this is > > literally identical to BGP-LU importing all the loopbacks between > domains or > > using CT class** There is no need for this feature to use the tunnel > > encapsulation attribute. I am not following why you would not use > BGP-LU or CT > > clas RIB.** > > > > “To avoid the side effect of applying the Tunnel Encapsulation > > attribute to any packet that is addressed to the GW itself, the GW > > SHOULD use a different loopback address for packets intended for it.” > > > > **I don’t understand this statement as the next hop is the ingress and > egress > > PE loopback0 that is the next hop being tracked for the gateway load > balancing. > > The GW device subnet between the GW and PE is not advertised into the > internet > > domain as we do next-hop-self on the PE PE-RR iBGP peering and so the GW > to PE > > subnet is not advertised.** Looking at it a second time I think we are > > thinking here BGP-LU inter-as opt c style import of loops between > domains and > > so instead of importing the loop0 which carries all packets on the GW > device > > use a different loopback GW1 so it does not carry the FEC of all BAU > packets > > similar concept utilized in RSVP-TE to VPN mapping "per-vrf TE" concept. > > > > “As described in Section 1, each GW will include a Tunnel > > Encapsulation attribute with the GW encapsulation information for > > each of the SR domain's active GWs (including itself) in every route > > advertised externally to that SR domain. As the current set of > > active GWs changes (due to the addition of a new GW or the failure/ > > removal of an existing GW) each externally advertised route will be > > re-advertised with a new Tunnel Encapsulation attribute which > > reflects current set of active GWs.” > > > > **What is the route being advertised externally from the GW. So the > routes > > advertised would be all the PE loopback would be advertised from both > ingress > > and egress domains into the internet domain and all loopback from the > internet > > domain into the ingress and egress domain which could be done via BGP-LU > or CT > > RIB – no need do reinvent the wheel and create a new RIB. So BGP-LU or > CT RIB > > track the current set of active next hop GWs loopbacks between > domains**If you > > do SR-TE stitching then you can do the next-hop self on each PE PE-RR > for the > > load balancing and that would work and the load balancing would be to > the PE > > loopbacks or if its an end to end SR-TE path using BGP-LU or CT RIB via > > importing all the PE loopbacks between domains the current set of active > GWs > > would be tracked via the BGP-LU or CT RIB. So if the active GWs change > due to > > GW failures they would be withdrawn from the BGP-LU or CT underlay RIB. > No > > need now for the tunnel encapsulation attribute at least for the GW auto > > discovery load balancing** > > > > I think it still maybe possible to retrofit this draft to utilize the CT > RIB or > > BGP-LU for the GW load balancing so nothing new has to be designed as > far as > > the underlay goes, however maybe the idea of providing some visibility > into the > > VPN overlay route to the underlay – maybe their maybe some benefit of > using the > > tunnel encapsulation attribute RT import policy to attach to the VPN > overlay > > prefixes. > > > > As CT draft provides a complete solution of providing the VPN overlay > per VPN > > or per prefix underpinning of the VPN overlay to underlay CT RIB the > problem > > statement is completely solved with either the CT draft or BGP-LU. > > > > Minor issues: > > None > > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > > > Please add normative and informative references below. > > > > I would reference as normative and maybe even informative the CT Class > draft > > which creates a new transport class and I think this draft can really > work well > > in conjunction with use of the CT class to couple the GW RIB created to > the CT > > class transport RIB and provide the end to end inter-AS stitching via > the PCE > > CC controller. I am one of the co-authors of this draft and I think > this draft > > could be coupled with this GW draft to provide the overall goals of > selective > > GW load balancing. > > > > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-kaliraj-idr-bgp-classful-transport-planes-07 > > > > I would also reference this draft for CT class PCEP coloring extension. > > > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-rajagopalan-pcep-rsvp-color-00 > > > > As this solution would utilize a centralized controller PCE CC for inter > as > > path instantiation for the GW load balancing, I think it would be a good > idea > > to reference the PCE CC, H-PCE and Inter-AS PCE and PCE SR extension as > > informative and maybe even normative reference. > > > > > > > > -- > > last-call mailing list > > last-c...@ietf.org > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call > > -- <http://www.verizon.com/> *Gyan Mishra* *Network Solutions A**rchitect * *Email gyan.s.mis...@verizon.com <gyan.s.mis...@verizon.com>* *M 301 502-1347*
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