Stewart, thanks for your review. Al, thanks for responding. I entered a No 
Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Feb 12, 2021, at 12:04 PM, MORTON, ALFRED C (AL) <a...@research.att.com> 
> wrote:
> 
> Thanks for your review, Stewart!
> 
> please see reply below,
> Al
> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Stewart Bryant via Datatracker [mailto:nore...@ietf.org]
>> Sent: Friday, February 12, 2021 10:40 AM
> ...
>> Summary: A well written text ready for publication
> [acm] 
> Thanks!
>> 
>> Major issues: None
>> 
>> Minor issues: None
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> 8.4.  Running Code
>> 
>>   This section is for the benefit of the Document Shepherd's form, and
>>   will be deleted prior to final review.
>> 
>> SB> I am wondering if this was supposed to be deleted before this review,
>> or whether you plan to keep it?
> [acm] 
> Yes, we'll certainly delete this section before the RFC Editors see it. 
> However,
> there is a lot of review yet to happen. I really don't mind if the IESG
> sees it in some form, but we don't want to risk endorsing one implementation, 
> IIRC.
> 
> Also, this material could move to the Doc Shepherd's form, but has not yet:
>       Document Quality:
> 
>       Are there existing implementations of the protocol? ...
> 
> I see that we need to update the reference in section 8.4:
> OLD
> [udpst]    AT&T, "UDP Speed Test Open Broadband project", August
>              2020, <https://github.com/BroadbandForum <TBD>>.
> NEW
> [udpst]    udpst Project Collaborators, "UDP Speed Test Open Broadband 
> project", 
>              December 2020, <https://github.com/BroadbandForum/obudpst>.
>> 
>> 
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