On 1/27/2021 7:45 PM, Barry Leiba wrote:

I thunk the text that Dave has is correct — certainly more correct than the suggestion, which would imply character composition rather than the image composition that’s being discussed here.

I don’t think a change to the text will really help, but a “(for example, ...)” might.

Barry, thanks.

However to the extent that there's any misunderstanding of the text by one thoughtful, experienced reader, there's likely to be more. I've no idea how to make it clearer or more robust, though.

d/

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Dave Crocker
Brandenburg InternetWorking
bbiw.net

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