Mohit, thanks for your review. Stephen, thanks for your response. I entered a Yes ballot.
Alissa > On Nov 25, 2020, at 6:47 AM, Stephen Farrell <stephen.farr...@cs.tcd.ie> > wrote: > > > > On 25/11/2020 11:46, Mohit Sethi via Datatracker wrote: >> Reviewer: Mohit Sethi >> Review result: Ready > > Thanks. Will look at those nits when next editing. > > Cheers, > S. > >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> Document: draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-09 >> Reviewer: Mohit Sethi >> Review Date: 2020-11-25 >> IETF LC End Date: 2020-11-30 >> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat >> Summary: This document deprecates older versions of TLS and DTLS. It also >> updates many RFCs that normatively refer to the older TLS/DTLS versions. >> Major issues: None >> Minor issues: None >> Nits/editorial comments: In section 1.1, typo in "waas defined to detect". >> Most references to RFCs are of the form "[RFC7507]". Can we change "RFC 7457 >> [RFC7457]" to "[RFC7457]" for uniformity. Similarly, perhaps you could change >> "RFC5246 [RFC5246]" and "RFC4346 [RFC4346]" to "[RFC5246]" and "[RFC4346]". >> In section 2 "NIST for example have provided " should be "..has provided...". >> In section 6 "this document is called out specifically to update text >> implementing the deprecation recommendations of this document." I was >> initially confused with the repeated usage of "this". Perhaps it would help >> to >> be more explicit. > <OpenPGP_0x5AB2FAF17B172BEA.asc>_______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org <mailto:Gen-art@ietf.org> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>
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