Roni, thanks for your review. Ian, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Dec 14, 2020, at 11:45 AM, ianfar...@gmx.com wrote: > > HI Ron, > > Thanks for the review and comments. Please see inline below. > > Ian > >> On 12. Dec 2020, at 16:44, Roni Even via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> >> wrote: >> >> Reviewer: Roni Even >> Review result: Ready with Nits >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-pd-relay-requirements-?? >> Reviewer: Roni Even >> Review Date: 2020-12-12 >> IETF LC End Date: 2020-12-14 >> IESG Telechat date: 2020-12-17 >> >> Summary: The document is ready for publication with nits as a standard track >> RFC >> >> Major issues: >> >> Minor issues: >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> 1. first sentence in section 3.5 "If the client loses information about a >> prefix that it is delegated ..." not clear "it is” > > [if - Suggested reword: > > If the client loses information about an an active prefix lease it has been > delegated... > > ] > >> 2. section 7 "This document >> does not add any new security considerations beyond those mentioned in >> Section >> 22 of [RFC8213]." RFC8213 does not have section 22 , did you mean of RFC8415? > > [if - RFC8213 is correct. The draft has been updated just to reference > RFC8213, rather than > any specific section as the whole document is relevant.] > >> >> 3. In section 7 are there any security requirements for the operational >> interface requirements from section 4.4? > > [if - Good point. How about adding a reference recommending that RFC4778 > (Current Operational Security Practices in > Internet Service Provider Environments) is implemented?] > >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> dhcwg mailing list >> dh...@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dhcwg > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
