Wow, David, thanks for the super-quick review! Barry
On Fri, Jul 24, 2020 at 6:48 PM David Schinazi via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: David Schinazi > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-partial-response-12 > Reviewer: David Schinazi > Review Date: 2020-07-24 > IETF LC End Date: 2020-08-14 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: Document is clear, well-written, and short. Thank you! > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: After reading the document, I was somewhat > confused as to the definition of fieldSet query parameter. > I think adding a few sentences to Section 2 explaining that > a field set is a string that the server generates which maps > to a set of fields only known to the server would help. > Additionally, specifying that the string can't be empty and > which characters are allowed might help avoid interop > issues down the road. > > Nits/editorial comments: None > > > >
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