Stewart, thanks for your review. Rick, thanks for agreeing to make the changes. I enetered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Aug 6, 2019, at 5:50 AM, Rick Taylor <[email protected]> > wrote: > > Hi Stewart, > > Thanks for the prompt review. We will wait for a few more reviews and > publish a fixed document. > > Many thanks, > > Rick > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: manet [mailto:[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>] >> On Behalf Of Stewart Bryant >> via Datatracker >> Sent: 06 August 2019 10:04 >> To: [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> >> Cc: [email protected] >> <mailto:[email protected]>; [email protected] >> <mailto:[email protected]>; >> [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> >> Subject: [manet] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid- >> extension-05 >> >> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant >> Review result: Ready with Nits >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-05 >> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant >> Review Date: 2019-08-06 >> IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-15 >> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat >> >> Summary: A well written document with a few nits that should be looked at. >> >> Major issues: None >> >> Minor issues: None >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> >> " The Dynamic Link Exchange Protocol (DLEP) [RFC8175] describes a" >> >> Nits says that the "[]" brackets should be removed >> >> ========== >> >> " None of the features introduced by this extension require extra >> consideration by an implementation." >> >> I think that should be >> >> "None of the features introduced by this extension require extra >> security consideration by an implementation." >> >> ============== >> >> "Assign a new DLEP Extensions Registry value (TBD1) from the" >> >> I think that should be >> >> "Assign a new DLEP Extensions Type Values Registry value (TBD1) from the" >> >> ============== >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> manet mailing list >> [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/manet >> <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/manet> > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>
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