I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-curdle-gss-keyex-sha2-08 Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2019-01-08 IETF LC End Date: 2019-01-08 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - section 2 page 2: please add RFC 8174 with RFC 2119 (note this can (should?) be done by the RFC Editor) - 7.3 page 10: I have a mixed feeling about the "must". As the problem is real some could want a MUST but the attack is both an example (so the defense too) and against a feature which is not the subjet of the document. I have no good proposal so I leave this to the security directorate. (spelling) - 3 page 3 and 5.2 page 9 table titles: refences -> references - 5.2 page 4: Helman -> Hellman - 5.1 page 4: trasmitted -> transmitted - 5.1 page 5: estalishment -> establishment Regards [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
