Meral, thanks for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa
> On Nov 13, 2018, at 7:22 PM, Meral Shirazipour > <[email protected]> wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>>. > > Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2018-11-13 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-11-13 > IESG Telechat date: 2018-11-21 > > > Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I > have some comments. > Major issues: > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > -[Page 21], last row in Table, "types are are omitted"----->"types are > omitted" > -[Page 21], last row in Table, "If the data type is are omitted"----->"If > the data type is omitted" > > -[Page 22], Section 7.5, "collection and and"---->"collection and" > -[Page 37], "may have be split"---->"may have been split" > -[Page 37], "may have be sent"---->"may have been sent" > > -[Page 38], "choronological"--->"chronological" > -[Page 63], "schema to to read"---->"schema to read" > > Best Regards, > Meral > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson Research > www.ericsson.com > <http://www.ericsson.com/>_______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>
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