Jeff,
On 8/27/18 2:18 PM, Jeff Tantsura wrote:
2) MINOR:
Section 1 also says:
Although MSD
advertisements are associated with Segment Routing, the
advertisements MAY be present even if Segment Routing itself is not
enabled.
I found nothing else in the document that elaborated on this. Further
explanation is needed, in a section other than the introduction.
[jeff] the meaning of the statement is that MSD MAY be advertised even if
Segment Routing is not enabled, ie MSD(s) advertisement could be used by any
other application that would find the data provided of value. I would
appreciate, if you could be more specific about what's missing.
Perhaps this is obvious to the likely readers, but not to me...
(As someone with absolutely no knowledge of OSPF I found the specifics
of the document to be nearly impenetrable. But I'm not part of the
target audience.)
I thought this information was specific to segment routing (whatever
that is), so what is the point of having this information if segment
routing isn't enabled? How would it be used? For me some discussion of
that would be helpful.
In any case, AFAIK an "introduction" serves to introduce the material
that is covered in more depth later in the document. In this case it
isn't introducing anything that comes later. If it is to only appear in
one place, then I would expect it to be later in the document.
Thanks,
Paul
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