Hi Francis,
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Document: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-09.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20180123
IETF LC End Date: 20180115
IESG Telechat date: 20180125
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments: (update)
I noted these on the 06 version but I refer to 09 (last) version which
has been published since my review.
- 2 page 3: update RFC 2119 by RFC 8174 (or leave the RFC Editor to do
this)
- Appendix E page 74 (twice): control-plane-protocl -> control-plane-protocol
Good catch.
I introduced an IESG note for this.
Regards, Benoit
I trust Yangdoctor about yang correctness.
Thanks
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