Hi Vijay, Thanks, I will fix these two nits Roni > -----Original Message----- > From: Vijay Gurbani [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: יום ד 10 מאי 2017 21:32 > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-11 > > Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-11 > Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani > Review Date: 2017-05-10 > IETF LC End Date: 2017-04-20 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: Ready with nits. > > Major issues: 0 > > Minor issues: 0 > > Nits/editorial comments: > - S5: s/An example (this is only an example), where/An example where/ > (I suspect that the reader will get the idea that this is only an > example. There are a couple of occurrence of this in S5.) > > - S6: s/When doing SDP Offer/When engaging in SDP Offer/ > > Thanks! >
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