Dan, thank you for your review! Alissa > On Mar 31, 2017, at 11:39 AM, Dan Romascanu <droma...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-pals-status-reduction-?? > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review Date: 2017-03-31 > IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-31 > IESG Telechat date: 2017-04-13 > > Summary: > > This document describes a very useful optimization for MPLS LSP PWs > operations by defining a method for generating an aggregated PW > status message transmitted on a MPLS LSP to indicate the status of the > PWs carried on the LSP. The document is clear, detailed and provides > all needed information for implementers to write code and for > operators to deploy. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > 1. In section 8, first paragraph: s/rages/ranges/ > 2. In sections 8.3, 8.4 the construct "IETF Review" is worded in three > different ways (IETF review, IETF Review, "IETF Review") - better > align > > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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