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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2016-10-07
IETF LC End Date: 2016-05-31
IESG Telechat date: 2016-10-13
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits: 2
Issues:
(1) NIT: "RTT" is used without definition. (There used to be a
definition but it has been removed.)
(2) NIT: unlinked references
I found a number of cases where, in the html format, references are not
hyperlinked:
[RFC4342] section 3
[RFC6679] section 3.1.7
[RFC1981] section 3.2
[RFC6935] section 3.4.1
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