Bonjour Francis,
First of all, thanks for your review.
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2 and A page 21: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
I'm using xml2rfc with <?rfc rfcedstyle="yes" ?> that enforces
"Acknowledgements". It then seems that the current preferences of the
RFC Editor have changed. I'll deactivate that option, and verify it
does not break something else elsewhere.
- 2.2.1 page 5: e.g. -> e.g.,
- 3 page 11: e.g, -> e.g.,
- 7.1.1 page 15: I strongly suggest to not name the algorithm X,
i.e., Subject: Registration of NNTP compression algorithm X -> Z
OK.
- 7.1.2 page 16: if you can do that (or ask the RFC Editor):
insert a line break before "(<ietf-" in place than between
this and "nntp@...".
Yes, I can do that with an unbreakable hyphen "(<ietf&nbhy;nntp@...".
- Authors' Addresses: I suggest to change US into USA. BTW if you
prefer ISO IS 3166 2 letter codes you should change France into FR
Noted.
PS: about the not ASCII characters in Authors' Addresses, you can (should)
ask the RFC Editor for guidelines (I know things are changing about
this point but not what will be implemented before the publication
of this document...)
Thanks for the piece of advice.
Should I contact the RFC Editor right now, or once the document will
reach them?
--
Julien ÉLIE
« Un voyage de mille lieues commence toujours par un premier pas. »
(Lao Zi)
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