Hi Brian, Thanks for your review! Please see inline.
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) > reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. > Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-clue-datachannel-13.txt > Reviewer: Brian Carpenter > Review Date: 2016-07-28 > IETF LC End Date: 2016-08-01 > IESG Telechat date: > > Summary: Ready > -------- > > Minor issues: > ------------- > > Mainly for my own education: > > 3.2.6. SCTP Multihoming > > SCTP multi-homing is not supported for SCTPoDTLS associations, and > can therefore not be used for a CLUE data channel. > > What is the advantage of SCTP if you don't get the benefit of multihoming? There are other SCTP features that are used. The most essential is the SCTP multi stream feature, which allows multiple data channels using a single SCTP associations: each data channel is implemented using two unidirectional SCTP streams. SCTP also provide different options when it comes to data transport reliability and ordering, and data channels can use different combinations. >Nits: >----- > > I expected a reference to draft-ietf-clue-protocol where CLUE is first > mentioned in the Introduction. I'll fix that. Regards, Christer _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
