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For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-mux-exclusive-08.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20160707 IETF LC End Date: 20160708 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 4.4 page 5: I am not sure that "The offerer might e.g. send a new offer" is correct (i.e., is a comma required? where?) I leave this to the RFC Editor... - 5.2 page 6 and 5.3 page 7: I'd like to get titles on same pages than updates. IMHO it is an unwanted side-effect of a device which forces OLD nd NEW TEXTs to be on same pages. Something else for teh RFC Editor... - 5.2 page 7: my spell checker complains about signalled but as it is in the OLD TEXT there is no serious reasons to not get it in the NEW one. - 5.3 page 8: "a=candidiate:" -> "a=candidate:" Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
