On 7/6/16 5:18 PM, Donald Eastlake wrote:
Hi Paul,
On Wed, Jul 6, 2016 at 1:34 PM, Paul Kyzivat <pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu> wrote:
Donald,
On 7/5/16 9:51 PM, Donald Eastlake wrote:
Hi Paul,
Version -09 has been uploaded with the intent that it resolve your
comments.
Looks good except for one thing:
Some of the new text in section 7 has me baffled:
The following processes should be followed in interpreting sets of
AFN values in an IA APPsub-TLV to synthesize addresses. These apply
whether the AFN values came from sub-sub-TLVs or appeared within an
Address Set or came from both sources. In general, the processing is
applied separately to each Address Set as supplemented by any Fixed
Address sub-sub-TLVs that are present.
...
Typically, an OUI would be provided as a Fixed Address sub-sub-TLV
(see Section 3.2) using the OUI AFN but there is no prohibition
against one or more OUIs appearing in an Address Set.
Each Address Set, after being supplemented by any Fixed Address sub-
sub-TLVs, is processed by combining each OUI in the Address Set with
each MAC/24 and each MAC/40 address in the address set.
I get it when an OUI comes as a Fixed Address. That value is combined with
each MAC/24 and MAC/40 in the address set, creating a new column in the
address set. But I have no idea what it means if an OUI appears in the
address set. In that case there will be a whole column of them, with a
distinct value in each row. Does each one combine with MAC/*s in *every*
row, or only with the MAC/*s in the *same* row? That latter seems like the
more sensible interpretation, but the intent isn't clear. Frankly this kind
of usage seems more like nonsense.
I don't see any reason to make the processing more complex with
special cases just because some uses seem very unlikely.
I certainly agree. I expect I'm not understanding the text way you
intend it to be understood.
You take the addresses from an Address Set and then you
supplement them from any Fixed Address sub-sub-TLVs that might be
present in the same IA APPsub-TLV. After that step, you have a set of
addresses and it no longer makes any difference where they came from.
You then perform certain processing on OUI, MAC/24, and MAC/40
addresses that are present, if any, to produce some number (possibly
zero) of 48 and/or 64 bit MAC addresses. You then perform a second
stage of processing using any IPv6/64 addresses, 48-bit MAC addresses,
and/or 64-bit addresses that are present, if any, to produce some
number (possibly zero) of IPv6 addresses.
I think my confusion is that I have been thinking of these things as two
dimensional tables, so that the processing adds columns, while you are
thinking of them as providing a list of sets, so that the rules are
describing how to transform each set.
Additionally, because I was thinking of them as tables, I was thinking
that if you put an OUI in the table (as a column) then the recipient
ends up storing that, even though it isn't a useful thing to keep. I
think I now get it that the recipient is probably simply processing each
row and then storing away the parts that are interesting to it, so any
uninteresting parts are discarded.
So feel free to leave things as-is if you believe it will be clear to
those who care.
Thanks,
Paul
Why bother making the above description more complex by
prohibiting OUIs in Address Sets? (or saying they are ignored in
Address Sets or the the entire Address Set with an OUI is ignored or
..., which would probably be better to say since otherwise you would
want to say what to do about the (artificial in my opinion) "error"
condition of finding any OUI in an Address Set which implies it is in
the template for the Address Sets in that IA-APPsub-TLV.)
But maybe it would make more sense to simply say that OUIs (and the other
partial addresses) only make sense in special contexts such as the Fixed
Address sub-sub-TLV.
Any OUI in an Address Set is, I admit, pretty odd. But I would expect
MAC/24 and the like to be in Address Sets. The idea is that you have,
for example, lots of end station physical Ethernet ports on links
attached to some RBridge, all from the same manufacturer with the same
OUI. So you stick that OUI in a Fixed Address sub-sub-TLV and then you
can save space by just putting a MAC/24 in the Address Set for each of
those ports in the IA APPsub-TLV originated by the RBridge.
The text already says that "typically" an OUI would be in a Fixed
Address sub-sub-TLV...
Thanks,
Donald
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Thanks,
Paul
Thanks,
Donald
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On Tue, Jul 5, 2016 at 9:32 AM, Paul Kyzivat <pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu>
wrote:
On 7/4/16 11:35 PM, Donald Eastlake wrote:
Hi Paul,
I believe we are generally in agreement.
On the table in the IANA Considerations, I have read
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-leiba-cotton-iana-5226bis-15#section-1.1
and I can understand why you commented as you did. But, since all the
table entries were created by IANA actions, I still think the draft is
OK in having that table in the IANA Considerations Section. This is
not a case of including some technical specification in with the IANA
Considerations. It's still all code points.
OK. It is not a big deal.
Thanks,
Paul
Thanks,
Donald
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155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA
d3e...@gmail.com
On Mon, Jul 4, 2016 at 6:50 PM, Paul Kyzivat <pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu>
wrote:
Donald,
On 7/4/16 5:26 PM, Donald Eastlake wrote:
Hi Paul,
Thanks for your comments. Sorry for the delay in response.
Please see below.
No problem. I was just concerned that my review hadn't been received.
On Mon, Jun 27, 2016 at 6:46 PM, Paul Kyzivat <pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu>
wrote:
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Document: draft-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2016-06-27
IETF LC End Date: 2016-06-28
IESG Telechat date: 2016-07-07
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in
the review.
This is a well written document. I was generally able to follow it
even though I know nothing about the subject.
Issues:
Major: 0
Minor: 7
Nits: 2
(1) MINOR: (Section 2)
"Addr Sets End" is described as follows:
o Addr Sets End: The unsigned integer offset of the byte, within
the IA APPsub-TLV value part, of the last byte of the last
Address Set. This will be the byte just before the first
sub-sub-TLV if any sub-sub-TLVs are present ...
But the remaining text of this section, and the examples, imply that
this is really the length of the leading portion of this TLV ending
with the last Address Set. The programmer in me says these differ by
one, and that the implied definition is the reasonable one, while
the action definition, and the name used to identify it, are wrong.
I expect it would be difficult at this point to rename this field,
but at least the definition can be rewritten to be consistent with
the intended usage.
Right. How about
Addr Sets End: The unsigned integer byte number, within the IA
APPsub-TLV value part, of the last byte of the last Address Set,
where the first byte is numbered 1. This will be the number of the
byte just before ...
OK. If you count starting from one. (I don't, but it is your draft.)
(2) MINOR: (Section 5.1)
Normally I would expect this section to request IANA to assign new
values from the AFN table for OUI...RBridge Port ID. However it is
worded as "IANA has allocated". Perhaps this is because they have
already been (pre)allocated. I have no problem with that if IANA is
OK with it.
Yup, it say "IANA has allocated" because they are already allocated.
See
http://www.iana.org/assignments/address-family-numbers/address-family-numbers.xhtml
OK.
But IMO the references to IPv4...64-bit MAC are gratuitous and
inappropriate in an IANA Considerations section. If it is desired to
include a list of "useful" AFN values then that belongs in some
other portion of the document.
I disagree. It's "IANA Considerations", not "IANA Allocation Actions".
Someone looking for code points is likely look in the IANA
Considerations section. All the values shown are from the same IANA
registry. I can see no advantage to splitting this table between two
different parts of the draft.
When I wrote this comment I had in mind the following that I recently
read:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-leiba-cotton-iana-5226bis-15#section-1.1
(3) MINOR: (Section 5.1)
The "new" values here (OUI, MAC/24, MAC/40, IPv6/64) give "This
document" as their reference. But anyone consulting the IANA
registry and following it to this document would have difficulty
finding any *definition* of these things.
Section 6 discusses some operational issues with them, but at best
implies a definition. (RFC7042 might be considered a definition of
OUI, though it doesn't seem to say how big it would be.)
I think what is needed are explicit definitions of all of these,
including their widths. (In order to provide enough bits to complete
a MAC/24 it must be at least 24 bits wide, but that would be bigger
than needed for a MAC/40. So I guess it must be at least 24 bits,
and when used to expand a MAC/24 or MAC/40 an appropriate number of
its high order bits are used.)
It would be good for there to be a section, appearing in the TOC,
for each of these so that someone coming here from the IANA registry
will easily be able to find the definition.
This is a good point. Better definitions of these AFN types and better
references, either to within this document by explicit pointers to a
section within another document or both, are good points. Probably
Section 6 should be expanded and sub-sections added to it...
WFM
(4) MINOR: (Section 5.2)
This section defines a new registry with Expert Review as the
procedure for approving new entries. What I don't see is any
guidance to the expert on appropriate criteria to use to judge
suitability of new entries. Without any guidance, relying on the
whim of the expert can lead to variable, and perhaps biased,
results.
It would be good to give guidance on: what sorts of document
reference are acceptable, what information needs to be included in
the reference document, whether "special" values may be requested
(versus just assignment in order requests are received), and the
sorts of properties that are appropriate.
OK. Some guidance can be added.
(5) MINOR: (Section 6)
This section talks about the handling of OUI and IPv6/64 when they
appear in a Fixed Address sub-sub-TLV. It says nothing about their
meaning if these appear elsewhere, such as in a Template. I presume
this kind of usage is nonsense, but it would be better to explicitly
state it.
OK, the draft should explain their processing wherever they occur.
(6) MINOR: (Section 6)
The description of IPv6/64 says:
For this purpose, an 48-bit MAC address is expanded to 64
bits as described in [RFC7042].
It wasn't entirely apparent to me what part of 7042 covers that. It
would be helpful to provide the section where this aspect is
specified. (After some study I guess that it is section 2.2.1.)
OK.
(7) MINOR: (Section A.2)
I believe that the values of both 'Length' and 'Address Sets End'
are too small by 7 - presumably because they forgot to count the
fixed fields. This also applies to the "alternative" using explict
AFN encoding.
Thanks for catching that there is an error here.
Length should be the size everything after the 2-byte length
field. That's
7 fixed fields
36 three address sets, each 12 bytes
7 sub-sub-tlv one
14 sub-sub-tlv two
for a total of 64 so the value is off by 10.
Address Sets End should be the above less the sub-sub-tlvs, so that
would be 43 and the value shown is also off by 10.
I guess I also got it wrong.
But it was obvious to me that the examples weren't all done the same
way.
(8) NIT: (Section A.2)
Based on a very quick reading, ISTM that section 2.2.1 of 7042
suggests that the IPv6 addresses being constructed this way should
start with 0x02 rather than 0x20. But I'm far from sure I understand
this correctly.
Ahhh, there is indeed an error here but it is in the bottom 64 bits,
which should be a Modified EUI-64 identifier, as described in Section
2.2.1 of RFC 7042. Thus the top byte of the bottom 64 bits of the
resulting IPv6 addresses should be 0x02. The top byte of the entire
IPv6 128-bit address should be 0x20 as shown.
OK. Like I said, I didn't really understand the details.
Thanks,
Paul
(9) NIT: (Section A.2)
There seems to be a typo in the following:
The OUI would them be supplied
by a second Fixed Address sub-sub-TLV proving the OUI.
I think "proving" should be "providing".
OK.
Thanks,
Donald
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