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Document: draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-te-srlg-collect-06.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2016/06/03
IETF LC End Date: 2016/06/10
IESG Telechat date: 2016/06/16
Summary: Ready. This version contains some minor editorial updates
from -04 which addressed all my comments during the previous last call.
Thanks for addressing the rather more substantial comments on -02.
There are a couple of trivial nits noted below.
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
None
Nits/editorial comments:
s4.2, Length field: It should be noted that the length is encoded as an
unsigned binary integer.
s4.2, Reserved field: For consistency with the SRLG ID field
description, the (duplicate) size of the field should be removed. Thus
in the description:
s/This 15-bit field/This field/
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