Many thanks for the review, Matt! Jari
On 23 Mar 2016, at 18:48, Matt Miller (mamille2) <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq >. > > Document: draft-ietf-radext-bigger-packets-05 > Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller > Review Date: 2016-03-23 > IETF LC End Date: 2016-03-23 > IESG Telechat date: N/A > > Summary: > > This document is basically ready for publication as an Experimental > RFC, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. > > Major issues: NONE > > Minor issues: NONE > > Nits/editorial comments: > > * idnits complains about the abstract not directly say this document > updates RFC 6613 and RFC 6614; the document does say "extends" > instead, which seems fine to me. > > * idnits is complaining Copyright years are not matching; I assume > this will be fixed with the next update if not the RFC Editor > > * idnits is complaining that in Section 3. "Forward and backward > Compatibility", there is an instance of "SHOULD not" that ought to > be "SHOULD NOT". > > * idnits is complaining about "odd spacing" in Section 6. > "IANA Considerations" -- "containing maximum response" ought to > be "containing maximum response" > > * In Section 2. "Changes to Packet Processing", 'cloing' should be > 'closing' in "cloing the TCP connection". > > * In Section 3. "Forward and backward Compatibility", the > "backwward" in the section title isn't capitalized while the other > significant words are. > > > -- > - m&m > > Matt Miller > Cisco Systems, Inc. > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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