hello jari.

On 2015-12-17 5:02 , Jari Arkko wrote:
Thanks for the review, Dan! Erik, is there anything in the clarification that 
would be beneficial for future readers? (Just asking, not suggesting.)

to me, this existing text is clear enough (and it seemed like dan was happy with my clarification):

"... (so that it can be serialized in formats other than JSON) ..."

but if anybody thinks that this needs more explaining, we could certainly do that. my suggestion is to keep it like it is, but if there is a -03, then we can tweak the language a little.

thanks and cheers,

dret.

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