Thank you for your review, Francis! On 28 Sep 2015, at 16:13, Francis Dupont <francis.dup...@fdupont.fr> wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-bess-spbm-evpn-01.txt > Reviewer: Francis Dupont > Review Date: 20150925 > IETF LC End Date: 20150924 > IESG Telechat date: 20151001 > > Summary: Ready > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > - Abstract page 1: my spell checker complains about subtending? > (IMHO you should make it happy for the Abstract, i.e., change the > Abstract wording (and only the Abstract wording)). > > - ToC page 2 and 6 page 9: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments > > - 3 page 4: Reachabilty -> Reachability > > - 4.1 page 6: may be different -> can be different (or any > wording which doesn't use a RFC 2119 keyword even in lower case > in an ambiguous way) > > - 4.6 page 8 (twice): SPsourceID -> SPSourceID > (note I suppose the correct spelling is SPSourceID, anyway it can't > be both SPsourceID and SPSourceID so the document must be fixed) > > - 6 page 9: please insert a blank line before. > > - 9.1 page 10 (twice): spurious breaks in 802.1* references > > - 10 page 11: add USA (BTW it should be formally US (ISO IS 3166 > 2 letters) but the UPU says USA and it is what the first (and > only correct) entry has... > > Regards > > francis.dup...@fdupont.fr > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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