I think those cases should be fine, per your explanation. Btw I often try to use a different style in the abstract, one that is self-contained and relies little on acronyms. I know it isn’t always possible.
Jari On 09 Jul 2015, at 06:04, Yoav Nir <ynir.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi > > Sorry about that. I have looked over the draft looking for acronyms that were > not spelled out before use, and I could find only three: AEAD, which is used > unexpanded in the Abstract, but expanded before the next use in the > Introduction. I thought it was acceptable to avoid expansions in the abstract > (although I did expand IKE. The others are “IPsec”, which I think it’s fine > to not expand, and “VPN”, which I agree should have been expanded. > > Were there any others? > > Yoav > >> On Jul 9, 2015, at 1:10 AM, Jari Arkko <jari.ar...@piuha.net> wrote: >> >> Thanks for the review, Meral! >> >> (Authors, I assume you have seen the editorial comment below on acronyms; I >> don’t see any e-mail related to it.) >> >> Jari >> >> On 30 Jun 2015, at 07:10, Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com> >> wrote: >> >>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >>> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >>> http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. >>> >>> >>> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you >>> may receive. >>> >>> >>> Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305-10 >>> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour >>> Review Date: 2015-06-29 >>> IETF LC End Date: 2015-06-29 >>> IESG Telechat date: NA >>> >>> >>> Summary: >>> This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC. >>> >>> >>> >>> Major issues: >>> >>> Minor issues: >>> >>> Nits/editorial comments: >>> -Please consider spelling out acronyms at first use. >>> >>> >>> >>> Best Regards, >>> Meral >>> --- >>> Meral Shirazipour >>> Ericsson >>> Research >>> www.ericsson.com >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Gen-art mailing list >>> Gen-art@ietf.org >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >> >
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