Hi Francis, Sorry that I missed your comment. Your correction will be updated in the next revision.
Thanks. Young -----Original Message----- From: Jari Arkko [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Tuesday, May 26, 2015 6:21 AM To: Francis Dupont Cc: [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-09.txt Thank you very much for your review, Francis. Jari On 22 Mar 2015, at 22:49, Francis Dupont <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before > posting a new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-09.txt > Reviewer: Francis Dupont > Review Date: 20150313 > IETF LC End Date: 20150318 > IESG Telechat date: unknown > > Summary: Ready > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > I read the 09 version but was too busy to prepare the IETF meeting to > send these few comments. Note I know the 10 version is available so I > adjusted by comments (i.e., I don't raise concerns about removed or > improved texts :-). > > - 2 page 4 (end node): e.g. -> e.g., > > (it seems the very few other comments no longer apply! :-) > > Thanks > > [email protected] > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
