Thank you again for the review, Joel. I have balloted no-obj for this document in tonights’s IESG telechat.
Jari On 02 Jan 2015, at 23:47, Ersue, Mehmet (NSN - DE/Munich) <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Joel, > > thank you for your kind review. > > I agree with your comments and will consider them for the update. > > Cheers, > Mehmet > > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: ext Joel M. Halpern [mailto:[email protected]] >> Sent: Friday, January 02, 2015 9:46 PM >> To: A. Jean Mahoney; General Area Review Team; draft-ietf-opsawg-coman- >> [email protected] >> Subject: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-probstate-reqs-03 >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >> >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments >> you may receive. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-probstate-reqs-03 >> Management of Networks with Constrained Devices: Problem Statement and >> Requirements >> Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern >> Review Date: 2-January-2014 >> IETF LC End Date: 14-January-2014 >> IESG Telechat date: N/A >> >> Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. >> >> Major issues: N/A >> >> Minor issues: N/A >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> A loss rate of "10^-0" might be better written as "1". And sounds >> like a failed link rather than a loss rate, even if the cause is >> interference. (last paragraph of section 1.3) >> >> Section 3 states that requirements are uniquely identified by three >> digit numbers. In fact, they are identified by a major section number >> and a three digit minor requirement ID number. (So there is a 1.001 and >> a 2.001). So the description of the requirements template in the start >> of section 3 should be tuned to match what is being done. > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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