Martin: thank you for your review. Jari
On 02 Jan 2015, at 21:24, Martin Thomson <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-03 > Reviewer: Martin Thomson > Review Date: 2015-01-02 > IETF LC End Date: > IESG Telechat date: (if known) > > Summary: Ship it. > > Nits/editorial comments: > I think that there are a few too many Unnecessarily Capitalized > Phrases. Consider downcasing for statements like "Power, Energy, > Demand and Power Quality" or "It is assumed that Energy Management > will ". > > s/100.000/100,000/ > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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