Thanks, Francis, for the review.

>  first a meta-question: should this kind of documents refer to its
>  parent, RFC 6237 (same subject but RFC 6237 is Experimental, the
>  I-D is for Standards Track)? IMHO it should not (so the I-D is
>  right) because this will be (only) mentioned in the RFC index.

I'm not sure what you're asking: do you mean to muse about whether the
predecessor document should appear in the references section?  If so,
I agree with your conclusion: it shouldn't... because the predecessor
document will be made obsolete by this one, and because there's
nothing in the predecessor to which this is referring (except to its
existence).

>  - ToC page 2 and 9 page 11: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

Doh!  I've fixed the spelling in my working version; thanks.

Barry

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