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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-manet-nhdp-olsrv2-tlv-extension-01.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2014-02-04 IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-07 IESG Telechat date: Summary: Ready -------- Comments: --------- This draft is well-written and clear. It retro-fits extensibility to two existing specifications. As an author of RFC 6709 I find this an interesting exercise. Do the hints in http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6709#section-4 help, especially bullet 2? Minor Issues: ------------ It is highly unusual for a draft to formally update another draft (draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2), even though the latter is approved and in the RFC queue. If we were a rational organisation, that draft would be updated before publication. (The writeup actually says "The Optimized Link State Routing Protocol version 2 (OLSRv2) has been published as Standards Track." but that is inaccurate.) _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
