Great! :) Regards,
Christer Sent from my Sony Ericsson Xperia arc S Donald Eastlake <[email protected]> wrote: Hi Christer, Thanks for this review. See below. On Saturday, December 14, 2013, Christer Holmberg wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-trill-o-pw-03.txt Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 14 December 2013 IETF LC End Date: 23 December 2013 IETF Telechat Date: N/A Summary: The document is well written, and the document is almost ready for publication. Below I have a minor editorial comment. Major Issues: None Minor Issues: None Editorial nits: Section 1 (Introduction): The first sentence begins with: ” The IETF has standardized…” I don’t think that’s needed. I suggest to simply say something like: “The TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links) protocol [RFC6325] provides optimal pair-wise data frame routing without configuration in multi-hop networks with arbitrary topology.” OK. I see no problem with that change. Thanks, Donald -- Sent from Gmail Mobile
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