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Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-burst-gap-discard-13
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Apr-19-2013
IETF LC End Date: Mar-15-2013
IESG Telechat date: Apr-25-2013
This document is ready as a Proposed Standard. One minor comment and
one nit below.
Major: 0
Minor: 1
Nits: 1
Minor:
- S2.1, the sentence, "A packet that arrives within this time window
but is too early or late to be played out or thrown away before
playout due to packet duplication or redundancy shall be regarded as
discarded." is hard to read and parse.
Clearly, if a packet arrives early, it will be buffered. Just as
clearly, if a packet arrives too late to be played out, it will be
discarded. Maybe you should break the offending sentence into two
separate sentences, one dealing with early arrival and the other
with late arrival.
Nits
- S1.1, last paragraph: s/in[RFC3611]./in [RFC3611]./
Thanks,
- vijay
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Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA)
Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / [email protected]
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