I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietfdraft-ietf-appsawg-json-pointer-08.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 2013/01/07 IESG Telechat date: 2013/01/10 Summary: This document is almost ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. I do have a minor comment that you may wish to address and a procedural point for the GEN AD to consider. Minor ===== * Section 4 The following two pieces of text seem contradictory to me. It is possible that I am just misunderstanding something. If this is the case, please let me know. "If the currently referenced value is a JSON array, the reference token MUST contain either: ... * exactly the single character "-", making the new referenced value the (non-existant) member after the last array element." Which seems to indicate that the character "-" is valid for use and this is followed by the following text at the end of the section " Note that the use of the "-" character to index an array will always result in such an error; applications of JSON Pointer thus need to specify how it is to be handled, if it is to be useful." which seems to indicate that this is an error condition. Can you please clarify? Procedural ========== * There is a downref to RFC4627 that has not been called out. I looked up the shepherd writeup at http://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/appsawg/management/shepherds/draft-ietf-appsawg-json-pointer/writeup/ and it curiously seems to be incomplete. Has there been an update to the shepherd writeup since Feb 2012. The last one I know of is at http://www.ietf.org/iesg/template/doc-writeup.html Thanks Suresh _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
