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Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-464xlat-08
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email protected]>
Review Date: 2013-01-05
IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-10
IESG Telechat date: 2013-01-10
Summary: The document is ready for publication as a BCP.
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
- Expand acronyms at first occurrence. This includes: GGSN (used in
Figure 2), PDP (used in Figure 2, but not expanded until Section 7.2
later), ISP, 3GPP, GSM, and UMTS.
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain
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