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Document: draft-ietf-mptcp-api-06
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2012-11-12
IESG Telechat date: 2012-11-15
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an informational RFC.
All of the comments from my Gen-ART review of version 05 at IETF last call have
been dealt with to my satisfaction in the draft or in email, save the one minor
issue below.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
I made the following comment at last call. It's not a show stopper, but I think
it should be considered:
> -- It seems like at least passing knowledge of the sockets API is needed to
> understand this document. I'm curious why the POSIX reference is
> informational rather than normative?
The authors indicated they believed the reference at the end of paragraph 3 of
section 1 to be truly informational. However, I called out an mention at the
beginning of the same paragraph that should have included a citation, and that
I thought that citation would justify a normative reference. The authors added
the citation in version 06, but the reference is still informational.
Nits/editorial comments:
IDNits reports that "A later version (-12) exists of
draft-ietf-mptcp-multiaddressed-09"
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