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Document: draft-ietf-krb-wg-camellia-cts-01
Camellia Encryption for Kerberos 5
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date:13-Sept-2012
IETF LC End Date: 26-Sept-2012
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
The document seems to use "random2key" (in section 3) and
"random-to-key" (in section 4) to represent the same thing, apparently
meaning the "random-to-key" identity function of section 6.
Section 6 defines Ki in a different way than section 4. Section 4
apparently uses K0 and Ki to mean K(0) and K(i) for the iteration. (And
then in the next line uses K1, K2, ... Kn for these, without parens.)
But section 6 Ki is for a specific value in the encrypt/decrypt
functions. The simple solution would seem to be to consistently use
parenthesis in section 4.
Nits/editorial comments:
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