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Document: draft-ietf-karp-threats-reqs-05
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Jul-18-2012
IETF LC End Date: Unknown
IESG Telechat date: Jul-19-2012
Summary: This draft is ready as an Informational.
Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits: 4
Nits:
- S1, last paragraph has a spurious ":
s/in their usage."/in their usage.
- S1.1, in the description of Traffic Key: the second sentence is
a run on sentence and could do with an extra comma (,) as follows:
s/device configuration no data/device configuration, no data/
- S2.2, first paragraph:
s/yet-best- security-possible/yet-best-security-possible/
- S3.2, under "INFERENCE", there are six sub-bullets. The labels
on all of them except the last one are capitalized. Any reason
for the discrepancy?
Thanks,
- vijay
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Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA)
Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / [email protected]
Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/
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