Hi Richard, Thanks for the recommendation on editorial changes for definition of term of 'transitive link'. The 6lowpan-nd document refers to "non-transitive" link in the abstract and that is the only occurrence.
It is indirectly defined in RFC 4861 section 2.2 under "asymetric reachability" definition. Proposed solution: 1. Add "non-transitive link" in the Terminology section and refer to section 2.2 of RFC 4861. -Samita -----Original Message----- From: Richard L.Barnes [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Friday, December 30, 2011 2:12 PM To: General Area Review Team; The IESG Cc: [email protected] Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-6lowpan-nd-18 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-6lowpan-nd-18 Reviewer: Richard Barnes Review Date: 30 December 2011 IETF LC End Date: - IESG Telechat date: (if known) 5 January 2012 Summary: Ready, with one editorial nit. The phrase "transitive link" is unfamiliar to me. A definition would be helpful. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
