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Document: draft-ietf-sidr-rescerts-provisioning-10
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Aug-23-2011
IETF LC End Date: Unknown
IESG Telechat date: Aug-25-2011
Summary: This draft is ready as a Proposed Standard.
Major issues: 0
Minor issues: 0
Nits/editorial comments: 1
Nits/Editorial: I think it will be helpful to identify either in the
Abstract or in Terminology section what exactly is a "resource".
I do not think you mean traditional HTTP resources like files or
dynamically generated content, etc.
Thanks,
- vijay
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Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60566 (USA)
Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / [email protected]
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