Francis Dupont writes:
> Nits/editorial comments:
>  - 1 page 3: I.e. -> I.e.,
> 
>  - 1 page 4: adminstrator -> administrator
> 
>  - 1 page 4 (dubious wording): shared secret (\n) shared
> 
>  - 1 page 4: adminstrative -> administrative
> 
>  - 1 page 4 (twice): i.e. -> i.e.,
> 
>  - 2 page 6 (4 times); preprosessing -> preprocessing
> 
>  - 2 page 6: preprossing -> preprocessing
> 
>  - 3 page 8: passwod -> password
> 
>  - 4 page 9: unnecessarely -> unnecessarily
> 
>  - Author's Address page 14: FI -> Finland

All fixed.
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